There are a LOOOT of things still wrong with this so far.
"Soul Rippers: Mana harvesters were created by Dr.[REDACTED] in the town [FILE CORRUPTED] they were made to be the greatest force ever. Taking kids as young as 4 and putting them through forces genetic mutation. "
Elaborate. What kind of mutation? By what means?
"The out come was not as the doctor wanted. He kept creating monstrosity that keep craving human souls. "
There are literally no creatures ever to have eaten a soul. It is not possible at current time.
" He locked them all up. The last know created was in the year [REDACTED]. However all that were created are still alive and they are creating more and releasing them."
Why and how?
"They are 3x stronger then the average man and 1.5x faster than an Olympic runner. They have a extremely low mana level of 5. A abnormally large amount of health of about 150-200 depending on the version of mutation. There stamina is also extremely high to start 100. "
That's... fine
"What we know about is that there a 3 types. The ones that hide in plain sight and kill rarely. The 2nd is a little less conspicuous they will slaughter entire house holds and then go into hiding before repeating. Then there's the insane ones. The procedure drove them insane and they go on mass genocidal sprees. "
Why?
"We learned of this race through one of this sprees that ended in the death of thousands as it went through the 3 known stages and regenerating hundreds of times. They have the power to regenerate their limbs when they need to but they require human souls."
Once again. Consuming human souls (dont know why they have to be specifically human) is not within the current reach of science.
"STAGE 0: They look human. They love to deal self harm to themselves going as far to cut off limbs as long as they can still kill enough people to get the limbs back. The only known characteristic at this stage is their deformed and blackened right hand. Being able to touch a dying soul and siphon mana out of it causes undue stress on the arm and causes irreparable damage."
How is the arm capable of doing so? Why do they commit self harm?
"STAGE 1: They have siphoned off 18 to 20 peoples mana They have grown 6 large spikes or appendages that can be used for moment purposes or be launched as a weapon which take 4 rounds to regenerate. These projectiles are quite the heavy hitters. If all fired in one location at max speed they can easily pierce the armor of a light tank. They also have the abilities to act as transport allowing them to climb tall buildings or lift then off the ground. They can also become barbed embedding themselves in bodies and can fling people about."
What is their damage and AP value
"STAGE 2: They have sphioned off 60 people. They are even stronger and faster. Their spikes have also grown.They are about the size of a medium sized trailer. One of the 2 differences about them is the fact that black scales start to appear around their right eye and the eye starts to look reptilian. There arms are now capable of changing into any weapon imaginable and a gun that can fire 6 times a turn dealing 8 damage per shot. The bullets are made of bone infused with titanium. The blades and makes they created deal 5 damage each and can swing 3 times per turn on each arm."
Besides the obvious biological impossibility; What are the damage and rolls for the various weapons it can mimick?
"STAGE 3: Not much is known about stage 3 because there has only ever been 1 case. They have now grown to a larger size They are about as big as a large trailer. They can now summon rock walls out of the earth. The only known case was in the year [REDACTED] and the wall was used to allow it to get away from SRT personel. All attempts at finding it have proven unsuccessful."
So, the ultimate accumulation of excessive genetic mutation, many many children abused and put through gene therapy, killing hundreds of people and absorbing their souls is casting a moderate levelled earth spell?
"Not much else is known about this creature but from what we know is that their blood is highly toxic capable of inflicting 5 damage per turn if ingested or put into the blood stream. This wears off after 5 rounds. It also causes extreme dizziness causing user aim to falter tremendously. It has been show they will cut themselves inflicting 5 damage to themselves and coat the weapon for 3 turns or shorter if a hit is successful with a coated weapon."
Pretty creative. Though it probably would require some minor nerfing.
Aside from all that, I'd like info on each and every instance of the redacted markings. And be sure to correct some of the faulty spelling and grammar.
